Changes between Version 10 and Version 11 of dev/LinuxGentoo

Timestamp:

Oct 27, 2006, 11:59:14 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

simon

Comment:

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dev/LinuxGentoo

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 }}}
 
-From now on you should be able to play Orxonox, and if you have subversion installed and a login, you will also be able to develop->read on.
+From now on you should be able to play Orxonox, and if you have subversion installed and a login, you will also be able to develop.
 
 === Installing the Libraries ===
@@ -25 +25 @@
  * SDL_net, media-libs/sdl-net, web http://www.libsdl.org/SDL_net
  
-Here are the explicit commands to enter:
+Here are the commands to enter:
 {{{
 wraith root # emerge media-libs/libsdl
@@ -36 +36 @@
 ...
 }}}
-Gentoo is now ready to compile and run orxonox :) [[br]]
+Gentoo is now ready to compile and then run Orxonox.[[br]]
 
 
-
-=== Getting the Source ===
-First of all you will have to install subversion on your system: Make sure, that you have '''ssl''' included in your ''make.conf'' file:[[br]]
+=== Getting the Source Code ===
+First of all you have to install subversion on your system: Make sure, that you have '''ssl''' included in your ''make.conf'' file:[[br]]
 '''/etc/make.conf'''
 {{{
@@ -48 +47 @@
  ...
 }}}
-now emerge the subversion program
+now emerge subversion
 {{{
 wraith user # emerge subversion
 }}}
-Check out the source via svn anonymous, this will download the hole project to the directory orxonox-dir
+Check out the source via anonymous subversion login. This will download the whole project to the directory orxonox-dir
 {{{
 wraith user # svn co http://svn.orxonox.net/orxonox orxonox-dir
 }}}
-You won't be able to commit (check in) anything with the anonymous repository. You have to ask us for user/pass combination. If you have already an account check it out like this:
+You won't be able to commit your own code (check in) with the anonymous subversion repository. You have to ask us for a username/password combination. If you already have an account, check it out like this:
 {{{
 wraith user # svn co https://svn.orxonox.net/orxonox orxonox-dir
 }}}
-You will be asked for user name and password, that you have from us. 
+You will be asked for your username and password, that you got from us. 
 
 
 === Compiling ===
-Just change into the trunk directory, execute configure and make....
+Just change into the trunk directory, then execute configure and make....
 {{{
 wraith user # cd ./orxonox/trunk/
@@ -76 +75 @@
 }}}
 
+
 === Profiling ===
-If you want to profile (performance measuring) Orxonox you will probably want to view the statistics in a special program like kprof. On Gentoo systems you can just emerge it:
+If you want to profile Orxonox (measure its performance) you will probably want to view the statistics in a special program like kprof. On Gentoo systems you can just emerge it:
 {{{
 wraith root # emerge kprof
 }}}
-Orxonox runs much much slower with profiling enabled, so don't be embarassed!
+Orxonox runs much much slower with profiling enabled.
 {{{
 wraith user # cd ./orxonox/trunk/
@@ -91 +91 @@
 wraith user # ./orxonox
 }}}
-Ok. Orxonox now runs very slow and writes its profiling stats to a file called gmon.out. Remember that _only_ those functionalities, that you are using while running the program will be profiled (since the profile log is written while the program is been executed). [[br]]
-After you exit the application, you will have to parse the output file and then you are able to open it in kprof application:
+Orxonox now runs very slow and writes its profiling stats to a file called gmon.out. Remember that _only_ the functionalities you use while profiling will be profiled (since the profile log is written while the program is been executed). [[br]]
+After you exit the Orxonox, you can parse the output file and then be able to open it in kprof:
 {{{
 wraith user # gprof -b ./orxonox > text.out
 wraith user # kprof -f text.out
 }}}
-For more documentation see the DevelopmentResources.
+For more documentation see the [wiki:DevelopmentResources development resources].